I got part way through the article and started to turn off. I forced my way to the end, and I've decided - he still hasn't learned the lesson.
That is really badly written from the point of view of trying to engage and retain the reader about something he thinks is important, but the reader might not.
I'd place this post more in the category of "shambolic musing" that "carefully crafted marketing communication" but I would be interested to know which parts of the writing you found turned you off - it will certainly help hone my craft.
That is really badly written from the point of view of trying to engage and retain the reader about something he thinks is important, but the reader might not.
Ironic.